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2011年8月25日 星期四

Chapter 3

One day Coyotito didn't really feel good, so he went to the doctor, he doctor didn't like him a lot, so of course, the doctor didn't gave him the medicine.the pearl was just making too much trouble, I read the whole story already, at least, Coyotito was even chased by the thieves, and even be killed, so Their parents told him to throw the pearls away, because it was really causing too much troubles.

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  1. TOAST Score: 10/25

    T: 3/5. Have you proofread this at all?
    0: 3/5.
    A: 2/5. Only part of the assignment.
    S: 0/5.
    T: 2/5. Not a lot of effort.

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